Dude Don't Jump That!
Dude don’t jump that! By Gabe Nasrallah
“Mike your crazy
bro! Don’t jump over the fire dude, there’s no way your gonna make it!” Bret
yelled at Mike while laughing.
“Shut
up Bret!” Mike yelled back from the other side of the massive fire, “I can make
that jump easy buddy!” Mike, Bret, and Samuel were all on the rocky beach of a Georgia
lake, that was far below full. The low waters uncovered several old logs that
had been a menace to many an unwatchful boater. The three friends had hoisted a
few of them up and brought them to their favorite summer spot on the edge of
the water. With Bret’s dad’s lighter fluid and a few matches, they had made the
biggest fire any of them had ever seen, with flames almost touching the moon. Not
after long however, Mike was at the far end of the fire, sizing it up.
“He
always does this...” Samuel looked at Bret and smiled, “Why does he always do
this?” Mike had a reputation for jumping the occasional bonfire. You see back in
high school he played track and field for the varsity team and his best event
was the long jump. One semester, in 10th grade, he was challenged by
an 8th grade nobody to a long jump a competition after school. Mike was
always cocky about long jump, so he laughed and agreed to the kid’s challenge. The
whole varsity track team and 8th grade class showed up. That day the
8th grader gained the respect of not only the varsity team, but the
whole school. For the rest of the semester, he was known as “the kid who out
jumped a guy on the varsity team”. He was a middle school legend. Mike,
however, was laughed at by his team and never gained back their respect for his
long jump skills. He quit track that year. The next year he transferred schools.
But now, in his freshman year of college,
he always looked for an opportunity to prove to himself that he could’ve beat
that middle schooler.
“Sam, film this bro.”
Mike made a quick run up to get an idea of the size jump he was about to perform.
Samuel pulled out his phone and pressed record.
“If
your gonna jump it, just do it already!” Bret exclaimed, annoying with the wait.
“Okay!
I’m going this time, I promise.” Mike yelled back. He started his run towards the
fire. Mike was running full speed towards the blazing fire like he’d done towards
the sand pit in the long jump. The fire was getting closer and closer, and he
was getting ready to leap. Now, the fire was only a few feet ahead of him. This
was it. He was at the place in his run where he had to just close his eyes and
let his legs carry him over the hot bonfire. He said a quick prayer and committed,
only 2 feet away from the flames. Then he made the leap.
Mike’s
knees bent and he put every ounce of strength in his body into pushing them back
up, launching him into the air. He could feel the heat of the blaze on his
legs. As he got higher over the flames, the heat got more and more intense. As he
flew over the center of the fire, time seemed to slow down. His feet, frolicking
over the fire, went into slow motion. His mind then took him back to that
fateful day in his sophomore year.
There
he was, back on the school track field in his team uniform. The Flaming
Tomatoes had won state two times in the past 5 years so there was a lot expected
from it’s teammates. A younger, skinnier Mike was standing in the middle of the
field next to a short kid with glasses. A crowd swarmed around them as the kid stretched,
getting ready to give the long jump his all. Mike, however, with his head high,
was acting as cocky as ever. He wasn’t losing to some random middle schooler
who didn’t even play track. The kid was a foot shorter than mike and had legs
like a chicken. Mike looked at the kid.
“You’re
not gonna win little kid! You probably still have mommy tuck you in bed!” Mike whined
in the kids face. The kid only continued his stretches and focused on his task
ahead.
“Guys
I don’t think I can do this!” Mike sneered, doing a fake cry. He walked to the
starting line and waited for one of his track buddies to say go.
“Go!”
Mike was off, running at full speed towards the sand pit. This was routine,
they practiced the long jump almost every day. Mike got to the hash mark, planted
his feet, and launched, landing hard into the coarse sand. It was a good jump,
and he knew it. Mike got up and looked around at his team. James Dickman, a senior
committed to UGA, gave him a look of approval, and clapped his hands. There were
murmurs in the 8th grade crowd. Mike laughed.
“C’mom,
beat that buddy!” he looked at the kid who was lining up at the start line. Mike
got back to his group of teammates, and James Dickman yelled go. The 8th
grader was off, sprinting as fast as his legs would take him towards the worn-down
hash mark. As he got to it, he planted his feet about a foot before the mark
and launched off at an almost unearthly speed. It seemed like he was air born
for minutes as he gracefully floated over the mark in the sand where Mike had
landed. When the kid finally touched ground, it was almost a foot from Mike’s
puny little mark. The whole field was baffled. An applause broke the silence, which
led to another, and before Mike knew it, they were all yelling and dancing around
the small middle school kid. Mike didn’t say “good job” or “great jump” he just
walked away.
Mikes
feet were touching some of the flames now as he continued his flight over the
bonfire. The heat was almost unbearable. Suddenly, mid-jump, a detail from the day-he-was-out-jumped,
suddenly came back to him. Mike remembered seeing a small slice in the track
about a foot before the hash mark. In the moment it meant nothing, but now
looking back, it had almost looked like someone had cut the track up. Then he
remembered how the kid had jumped a foot early, before the hash mark. The kid
had put something under the track, probably springs or something! The kid
cheated! Mike was the real winner! A smile grew into the seams of Mike’s mouth
as he floated over the blazing fire.
Mike’s
airtime suddenly all went back into real speed. Mike had sent the jump over the
fire, but he hadn’t quite gotten as high as he should’ve. So, when he came down
from the arc of his leap, he, Samuel, and Bret all knew Mike had jumped too
short. He landed butt-first on the red-hot coals that were the edge of the fire.
A sharp flair of pain went through his body. Before he knew it, Mike was in the
cool lake, drenched from head to toe. His body throbbed with pain from the
unfortunate landing, but his mind wasn’t on his burns, it was on the kid who
cheated in the long jump.
“Mike
are you good dude?” Samuel asked while holding mikes arm.
“Talk
to us man!” Bret exclaimed, walking out into the lake where Mike was at. Mike looked
up. He opened his mouth to tell them about the realization he had had midair. He
was going to explain how the 8th grader had cheated and that he had
really won, but no words came out of his mouth. He thought back to that fateful
day. Suddenly, it hit him. You see, that’s the thing about maturing, you start
to see events that happened in the past from a different perspective. Well,
that’s exactly what happened to Mike, right there on that beach, with a burned back
and two worried friends. Mike realized what a jerk he’d been to the kid who was
years younger than him. Yes, the kid had probably cheated, but did Mike really
deserve to win?
This story is cool! I love the perspective. Very relatable, with a good moral lesson in the mix. It's also cool how you laid it out in a blog format--it gives it a more casual feel and speaks to your style.
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